User blog comment:Nebuliss/A short story, anyone?/@comment-24488727-20120629163531

for people to take you more serouisly you could cut a bit down on the word 'serouis' (No offense intended, although my user pic might look otherwise). I would try to go into why Draco hates Harry so much; Jelously because Harry gets more affection and attention, ect. I just started reading the series (on book two) so I don't know about any more interesting and unsolved conflict that involves Draco.